Need revision on the highlighted area in the 1st attachment. Please be very specific to my research paper topic as I DO NOT WANT the information to be in general or basic.I need the area highlighted to be replaced with the requirement above. Please remove the current information and have those information’s being very specific to my paper’s topic. I have attached the 1st document that only highlight the areas for revision and I have also attached the original paper submitted by the writer in order for the writer to review back or as a reference fro the areas that I required for revision.