A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx

by Anchinalu Mehari

Submission date: 13-Jan-2020 11:57PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1241736699 File name: A.M_HCA_320module_1_advocacy.docx (28.51K) Word count: 1721 Character count: 9508

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12% SIMILARITY INDEX

6% INTERNET SOURCES

4% PUBLICATIONS

8% STUDENT PAPERS

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2 4% 3 3% 4 1% 5 1% 6 <1%

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A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Comfort Nsiah, Mate Siakwa, Jerry P. K. Ninnoni. “Registered Nurses’ description of patient advocacy in the clinical setting”, Nursing Open, 2019 Publication

nursingworld.org Internet Source

Submitted to Aspen University Student Paper

www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov Internet Source

www.questia.com Internet Source

Submitted to Grand Canyon University Student Paper

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FINAL GRADE

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A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Your title page is not formatted correctly. Please fix this before the submission of Assignment 2. Use the resources I email at the start of class as a guidel

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Do not write Introduction here. This should be the same title that is on your Title page and should not be bolded

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Purpose Sentence Required

This is a good introduction, however you did not introduce the topics you will discuss. In future papers please remember to state the purpose of your paper. Usually the purpose sentence is the last sentence in the introduction paragraph, i.e. The purpose of this paper is to discuss advocating for patients, articulate safe practices in nursing, outline how nurses can advocate for healthcare consumers, and discuss how roles change as policies change.

Additional Comment

This introduction is tool long for a 1500-2000 word count paper.

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This Level 1 Heading should be written using both upper and lowercase:

Nurses and Safe Practice

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This is not presented appropriately.

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Citation Needed Cite Source: Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

Citation Needed Cite Source: Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

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Citation Needed Cite Source: Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html Additional Comment

Anchinalu, please paraphrase the words of authors and provide a proper citation.

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My Role in Advocacy

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You are repeating the same thing you have already stated

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Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing previously.

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If you learned this from Chapter 2, you must cite the textbook here

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Did you leave a word out

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Did you leave a word out

New Paragraph

Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing previously.

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How do your know this? A citation here would show the reader that what you are saying is credible

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Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing previously.

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How I See Patient Advocacy in the Near Future

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patient

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This sentence should be rewritten

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I am not sure what the second trend was

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Please fix this spacing problem

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Good conclusion. In your conclusion just summarize the key points you have already discussed in the body of your paper. You do not have to state what you believe, just the facts from the topics you discussed.

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Registered nurses’

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Advocating for nurses and nursing.