Feedback 1

FormatDoes the letter look professional?Yes.

Does the cover letter have a clear structure?Yes.

Is the language used appropriate?Yes.

Are there many grammar and spelling errors?No.

Content

Does the letter state which position is being applied for?Yes.

Does the letter state why the job appeals to the writer?Yes.

Are all selection criteria addressed?Most of them.

Is it clear which selection criteria is addressed?Yes.

Are the examples provided relevant to the selection criteria?Yes.

Does the writer use the STAR method?Yes.

Does the letter demonstrate the writer’s skills as an engineer?Yes.

Does the letter state what the writer would like to happen next?Yes

Does the letter have a polite close?Yes.

Feedback2

Does the letter look professional?•Yes, But the letter could be improved more to look more professional. As the letter opening should be “Dear”rather than (to whom it may concern).

Does the cover letter have a clear structure?•The structure is bit unorganized, because the letter should mention the introduction part first with the purpose of the letter.

Is the language used appropriate?•Yes, the language is appropriate and formal.

Are there many grammar and spelling errors?•No

Content

Does the letter state which position is being applied for?•yes

Does the letter state why the job appeals to the writer?•Yes

Are all selection criteria addressed?•Yes

Is it clear which selection criteria is addressed?•Yes

Are the examples provided relevant to the selection criteria?•Yes

Does the writeruse the STAR method?No

Does the letter demonstrate the writer’s skills as an engineer?•yes

Does the letter state what the writer would like to happen next?•Yes

Does the letter have a polite close?•Yes

Feedback3

Does the letter look professional?Yes

Does the cover letter have a clear structure?Yes

Is the language used appropriate?Yes

Are there many grammar and spelling errors?No

Content

Does the letter state which position is being applied for?Yes

Does the letter state why the job appeals to the writer?Yes

Are all selection criteria addressed?Most of did, just need more words

Is it clear which selection criteria is addressed?Yes

Are the examples provided relevant to the selection criteria?Yes

Does the writer use the STAR method?Yes

Does the letter demonstrate the writer’s skills as an engineer?Yes

Does the letter state what the writer would like to happen next?Yes

Does the letter have a polite close?Yes

Feedback4

Does the letter look professional?Yes.

Does the cover letter have a clear structure?Yes.

Is the language used appropriate?Yes.

Are there many grammar and spelling errors?No.

Content

Does the letter state which position is being applied for?Yes.

Does the letter state why the job appeals to the writer?Yes.

Are all selection criteria addressed?Not all of selection criteria addressed. You should read more about the given examples.

Is it clear which selection criteria is addressed?Yes

Are the examples provided relevant to the selection criteria?Yes.

Does the writer use the STAR method?Yes.

Does the letter demonstrate the writer’s skills as an engineer?Yes.

Does the letter state what the writer would like to happen next?Yes.

Does the letter have a polite close?Yes.

Feedback5

Does the letter look professional?

Yes.Does the cover letter have a clear structure?Yes

Is the language used appropriate?Yes

Are there many grammar and spelling errors?No

Content

Does the letter state which position is being applied for?Yes

Does the letter state why the job appeals to the writer?Yes

Are all selection criteria addressed?Almost all of them

Is it clear which selection criteria is addressed?Yes

Are the examples provided relevant to the selection criteria?Yes

Does the writer use the STAR method?Yes

Does the letter demonstrate the writer’s skills as an engineer?Yes

Does the letter state what the writer would like to happen next?Yes

Does the letter have a polite close?Yes